Cystadeuaeth Y Gerdd Rydd - ‘Caerdydd’

BEIRNIADAETH JIM PARCNEST

Daeth pump i’r ornest. Gresynu am ddiflaniad Bae Teigr Caerdydd yn sgil codi’r morglawdd i gronni dŵr afonydd Taf ac Elai y mae Rhys Epynt. Pennill hyfryd yw’r un sy’n enwi’r llongau a arferai hwylio i bedwar ban byd. Ond dylid ceisio creu clo mwy trawiadol. Canodd Sarn Fidfoel er cof am y fam-gu a roes ‘faeth y wlad / I’r crwt dinesig… ’ sef ei thafodiaith. Byddai cynnwys enghreifftiau o’r dafodiaith honno’n cyfoethogi’r gerdd. Atgof am ymweld unwaith a Chaerdydd mewn rali brotest a geir yn soned Gamallt. Byddai’r gerdd yn elwa ar gryfhau’r cyffro a ddylai berthyn i rali brotest. Mae Lleityn yn ceisio datrys cymhlethdod byw yng Nghaerdydd. Mae clo’r gerdd yn hyfryd o bositif – ‘Gwyddom taw fan hyn mae Cymru.’ Ond ofnaf fod y mynegiant…

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Barddas (Digital) - 1 Issue, Rhifyn Haf 2018 (338)

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